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传闻,你有问题?

现在的孩子很喜欢上时下很盛行的英文外教课,他们的传闻才能是提高了,但英文写作才能没有进步,好的英语作文一直很难从孩子的笔下产出。外滩君也经常看到满脸愁容的孩子在写作业时,永久把写作文放到最终,逼迫着自己赶在时刻节点前,费尽心机完结了使命。

没错! 听、说、读、写是英文学习亘古不变的论题,也是衡量学生英语才能素质最直接的标尺。学习英语言语毋庸置疑仍是要表现到写作上。写作,也作为英语学习最大的绊脚石,让许多学生望而生畏。

那么,好的英语作文终究长什么样,怎么让孩子的英语作文变得精彩,哪怕是简简单单叙说一个英文故事呢?

好的,我有答案!

怎么叙说一个事情,讲好一个英文故事,或许是自己阅历过的趣事、看过的电影、或读过的一本书……

这个夏天,咱们邀请到在藤校达特茅斯学院执教构思写作课程7年的Kevin教师,来叙说 “英文记叙文写作的隐秘”,辅导著作,处理写作的疑问。

让咱们来看看,经过Kevin教师的辅导,小学员的著作的前后比照。

学员著作比照

上下滑动阅览

Before

Beginning: In the future, human have almost used up all resources on the earth and the environment is badly polluted, so humans invented a type of cargo plane with nearly no pollution which needs two pilots to fly. This kind of plane can transport somehuge parts of equipment which willcanbe used in building facilities for therecyclingresourcesreuse. why is this important?It can stay in the air for more than forty days, but it travels extremely slow. In one flight, A and B, the two pilots are flying that kind of cargo plane. On the sky above the Atlantic Ocean, the radio connection with the air traffic controller suddenly breaks off. All communication equipment is shutting down.

Middle: A and B argued about what should they do to survive. They have different ideas. A says to go back to the airport which is only two days. But B says the to follow the navigation system the plane had already set before the malfunction of the equipment which takes about ten more days The first conflict begins later in the sky, two pilots are having more conflicts because the communication system are failed. Although they can live on the sky without any problem for twenty days, but because the fail of communication system, the carbine become a tiny separated island where there are only two man living on it. Later the plane will have more trouble which the two pilots need to work together to overcome them.i don’t understand why they can’t just land at an airport somewhere or even a large field......all planes have override systems which allow pilots to fly the plane manually.

Resistance: the two pilots are always having some disagreements about the decisions during the flight. And because the failure of the communicative system, they cannot ask the air traffic control about the exact thing they should do.they don’t t need to do this. the rules of flying are: 1. aviate, 2. navigate, 3. communicate. in that order.

End: They finally reach an airport and their lives are not in danger.

this doesn’t seem a lot different from the last version highlight your changes using a different colour so i can see them. also, i’m not understanding your logic here. this story makes little sense.

After

Humans have polluted the earth too much. In the future,the earth is no longer suitable for living . There is almost no water; and only the Pacific Ocean has reserved some clear water. The sky is grey all the time, almost half of the air is polluted by nuclear explosion and the whole environment is not suitable for the human anymore. Half of the species have died out. So, humans invent a kind of space ship that can transport some very huge parts of the facilities to a planet they discovered about 30- year-travel from earth. The planet has the same distance from its sun as the distance the earth to the sun. Therefore, it also has water and an atmosphere on it. After observing and analyzing the surface of this planet, people found that it is quite suitable for human to live on and there are no other species on it. It is definitely a potential new home for human!Amos and Bill are two pilots from the training school which is located on the moon and was built by the united government. Amos and Bill were once close friends when they were very young. Although they didn’t contact each other for 20 years, they still recognized each other when they met in the training center. After 20 years’ separation, their attitude towards this relationship has changed. Bill who is more withdrawn didn’t regard this relationship that important. However, Amos is so full of life and think optimistically about their friendship. He believer what they have when they were kids can still hold up right here in the training school. To improve their friendship, Amos planned to play a prank that they often did when they were kids, he thought this will help Bill to remember their past. Unfortunately, this prank went wrong and has caused serious injuries to Bill. It also destroyed the cargo spaceship model in the training school. This event didn’t make them become friends, on the contrary, Bill started to regard Amos as an enemy.

咱们能做什么?

处理你的写作困惑

教师介绍

Kevin McCarthy

藤校达特茅斯学院“构思写作课程”项目创办者;

7年达特茅斯“构思写作”课程授课阅历;

专业编剧,著作掩盖从好莱坞大电影,BBC迷你剧等多种银幕品种。

咱们好!我是Kevin教师。作为一名编剧,你可能在银幕上看到过我的著作,如《逃离拉斯维加斯》《浓情巧克力》等,欢迎咱们来参与我的构思写作课。

回忆本年寒假Kevin教师带来的“青少年英文记叙文写作”的根底班课程,他共享了怎么选材——有相同东西是绝无仅有的,便是“你的阅历”,如将自己的阅历,发作的趣事、看过的电影、读过的故事等等,或许便是最一般的主题,也能成为一篇耐人寻味的好故事。

写好一篇好的文章,讲好一个故事,其实是有规则可寻的,咱们需求在一个大的框架下运作故事的根本元素。Kevin教师会一一道来,怎么让你从无到有,让你借用电影、史诗、小说、神话等,叙说自己的阅历,让你能够写得一手好文章。

合适人群

6年级以上国内校园的初中、高中生

经过浅显易懂的叙说理论、写作技巧教授,学生能够把握记叙文写作、叙说的技巧。

学习方针

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这个暑假,仅此一期,Kevin教师会让你的文章愈加精彩。青少年英文记叙文根底班及实战班承受报名啦!每班限额15名,上课时刻为:

根底班 :

7月26、29日,8月1、4、7、10日 20:30-21:30

实战班 :

8月11、14、17、20、23、26日 20:30-21:30

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课程表

根底班

实战班

根底班课程纲要

实战班课程纲要

这个浓情的暑假,外滩君给你们带来的惊喜还不止这些,购买在线课程的学员,咱们一同赠送价值599元的录播课课程。

上下滑动检查完好纲要

第1课时:课程介绍

第一章:什么是叙说写作?

第2课时:故事(叙说类文章)的来源和作用

第3课时:故事的开展:在时刻轴上行进

第4课时:最早环绕故事打开的研讨

第5课时:前期故事的特色

第二章:故事的结构和情节

第6课时:故事必不可少的四要素:情节、布景、人物和抵触

第7课时:故事“三段论”

第8课时:情节:开展五阶段

第9课时:情节:七种根本类型

第三章:写好一个人物

第10课时:主人公与悲惨剧品格(Hamartia):以莎士比亚悲惨剧为例

第11课时:反派:以现代小说为例

第12课时:同盟

第13课时:一个英豪的旅程

第四章:故事的布景

第14课时:故事中的时空

第15课时:故事为什么需求布景:布景的作用

第16课时:布景的开展头绪

第五章:营建抵触

第17课时:抵触的结构和内容

第18课时:抵触的四层次

第19课时:风险、抵触与愿望

第六章:神话和故事“原型”

第20课时:不同类型的神话

第21课时:神话的用处

第22课时:以《特洛伊战役》中的海伦为例

(注:上课渠道为Classin,直播方式上课,每次课程均有课程视频回放,报名人数到达人数上限80%即可开班!直播回看有效期一个月。)

Q&A

怎么挑选合适自己的课程?

假如触摸过构思写作,或是现已参与过寒假根底班课程的学员能够报名实战班课程。假如之前没有构思写作阅历的学员能够参与根底班课程。

会安置作业吗?需求做多久?作业会反应吗?

每节课均会安置作业;大约需求1小时左右完结;每次作业提交后外教教师和助教教师会仔细阅览并在第2次直播课时给咱们一致反应。

请问和寒假根底班比较,实战班在内容上有什么改变?

比较根底班的内容,实战班的授课内容不仅仅局限于故事的结构怎么建立,引导学生深层次分析故事,学员将会对故事结构有一个更为杂乱的了解,提高修正他们现已写好的故事,或找到开端一个新的,更杂乱的故事所必需的组成部分。学完课程后,学生将能够辨认故事元素,并解说怎么和为什么运用它们,助力于后边更多优异的英文叙说写作。

请问两门课程能够一同报名,或许能够独自报一期吗?

能够的。能够独自报名根底班或许实战班,寒假完毕根底班的学员能够直接报名实战班。假如是第一次参与咱们的课程,两期一同报名能够优惠200元。

假如没时刻上课,错失直播怎么办?

假如真实没有时刻,能够请假,咱们直播课程全程会有录播回放,学生在一个月内能够重复回看。但假如没有特殊情况,期望不要请假,究竟实时互动的作用会更好!

请问购买后还能够退款吗?

请您在购买承认好上课时刻,开课前十天因个人原因提出退款的,退取膏火85%;第一次直播完毕后提出退款的,退取膏火80%。

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